Wednesday, February 18, 2009

You, looking at me (FICTION)

I look at you, looking at me
What do you think my eyes see
As you sit across the table, sipping tea?

"This cheese will soon expire,"
Your mother says. Why is this so dire?
Your eyes are aglow with desire.

You love me, this much I know.
"I think tomorrow it will snow."
Why is she always stealing the show?

Go attend to her, I see that you must.
We'll find a way to rekindle our lust.
"I love your watch. How much does it cost?"


  1. this is just incredibly good! loved every line!

    you are very very talented! AMAZING!

  2. I like it! I wanna right a song with this words! of course if u don't mind))