tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4168673984824835892.post391424208105053417..comments2016-11-04T14:29:23.468+01:00Comments on Onions & Tea: Work (FICTION)Innahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11418310116066016285noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4168673984824835892.post-47172786707794435982009-04-22T18:44:00.000+02:002009-04-22T18:44:00.000+02:00If you mean just the past couple of weeks when you...If you mean just the past couple of weeks when your boss has been on vacation, than it will soon end, at least, when he comes back and you go on vacation (to visit us!). If you mean more generally, than you really need to ask yourself, what the hell are you working so hard for? I mean, really? You don't want the best years of your life to go to waste!Innahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11418310116066016285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4168673984824835892.post-17389083778422362512009-04-22T04:09:00.000+02:002009-04-22T04:09:00.000+02:00I like this piece. I've been feeling like this lat...I like this piece. I've been feeling like this lately (in general terms), and you wouldn't even have to put "FICTION" at the end of it if I wrote it!Olegnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4168673984824835892.post-45778095827620315402009-04-21T21:59:00.000+02:002009-04-21T21:59:00.000+02:00email it is :)email it is :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4168673984824835892.post-87302543043658363592009-04-21T13:10:00.000+02:002009-04-21T13:10:00.000+02:00Do not by any means kill the editor; he's importan...Do not by any means kill the editor; he's important. All advice is helpful and appreciated, so I thank you in advance. You can post wherever you feel more comfortable - either email or here; as for me, I've got nothing to hide :) Looking forward to hearing more. Glad you liked the piece!! (and the labeling)Innahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11418310116066016285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4168673984824835892.post-36847352428420002692009-04-21T00:40:00.000+02:002009-04-21T00:40:00.000+02:00Hmm, I have a question. Say a piece of yours woke ...Hmm, I have a question. Say a piece of yours woke up the editor in me (that I try to keep comatose) and say he enjoyed this piece and had plenty to say. Would you prefer he email you with all this info or post it publicly? Alternatively we could punch him and the gut and ignore his please.<br /><br />But in short, there are two movements here that i like, there's a parallel between work in the beginning and end, and there's a buildup of wants or desires. both are very cool, and can be refined to increase the drama. <br /><br />also nice work on the labeling, reminded me not to dig into the work :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com